佳句臨摩

　　1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.

　　臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。

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　　2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.

　　臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

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　　3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.

　　臨摩：我認為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)現(xiàn)在很多大學生都喜歡追求名牌

　　2)產生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么

　　3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象

　　Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述目前熱衷于大學生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象;分析大學生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述“我”對大學生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。

　　高分范文

　　Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

　　Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.

　　[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.

　　[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]“有…傾向”。

　　[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。

　　[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”

　　[4]用于引出原因。

　　[5]which引導非限制性定語從句。

　　[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。

　　[7]“遠遠超出他們的消費能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。

　　[8]強調句型，此處是強調主語。not…but連接并列成分。

　　[9]“而不是”。

　　佳句臨摹

　　1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.

　　臨�。簩Υ髮W生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。

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　　2. 佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.

　　臨�。涸谑澜缟匣蛟S沒有什么游戲像賭博

　　像賭博的那么有害和危險了，它經(jīng)常會導致一個人破產，還會玷污人的心靈。

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　　3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.

　　臨�。汉芏嗤瑢W經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。